ラングリッチ 327回目 Don't touch the baby.

今日はBee先生。
昨日の出来事を文章に書いたものを直してもらいました。

私が書いた文章はこちら。直してもらったところをハイライトしました。

Yesterday I was in a train , a woman got in the train with carrying her baby buggy.　The baby buggy was hung a plate that written “ Don't touch the baby”. It was my first time to see that kind of the plate. I was little surprised. It meant beyond the letters “Don't touch the baby”. I felt it included “ don't touch the baby, don't speak to the baby, and don't look at the baby”. I thought it clearly refused any attention about the baby. I glanced at the baby, I didn't know she or he, but the baby was so cute, if one liked the children, people would speak to the baby. Some people tend to touch the baby's face even they didn’t have permission from the parents. I thought the mother had uncomfortable experiences about the baby by unknown people.

After going back to the home, I tried to find the plate written that word, but I couldn't. I found a website (it was a kind of yahoo answer). One mother brought the topic “Don't touch the baby”.There were many agree and disagree opinions. I thought there was a right answer about these topics.

たくさん直していただきましたよ。ベビーカーはstrollerというそうです。辞典ではbaby buggyって書いてあったのですが、こちらのほうが一般的だそうで、逆にbaby buggyって何と聞かれちゃいましたよ。Bee先生は文法ミスを直す時や、前置詞とか直す時、blank、blankって言って何入る？って必ず聞いてくれます。

先生が直してくれたのはこちら。格好良い文章になったわ〜。でも全部の文章を直してもらうには、あと１週間はかかりそうです。今週はまたBee先生週間になりそうです。

*Yesterday I was in a train , a woman got in with a baby in a stroller.　There was a wood plate that says “ Don't touch the baby”. It was my first time to see that kind of plate. I was a little surprised because “Don't touch the baby” those words mean stronger than it looks. I felt it includes “ don't touch the baby, don't speak to the baby, and don't look at the baby”. I thought it clearly denies any attention from the baby. I glanced at the baby because the baby was so cute and  I didn't know  whether the baby is a girl or boy. If someone likes children, people would speak to them. Some people tend to touch the baby's face even they didn’t have permission from the parents. I thought the mother had uncomfortable experiences about the baby by unknown people.

 *After going back home, I tried to find that wooden plate , but I couldn't. I found a website (yahoo answer), one mother brought up that topic “Don't touch the baby”.

There were many opinion that says they agree and disagree . I thought there was no right answer about the topic.